Like Lemon/Yaoi stories that involve you aren't as fun to read as OCs or anime characters to me. I don't mind reading them, but they don't feel in the blanks that you need to know. First off, you don't know your background story in that particular story. I'm not saying this for all of ReaderxCharacter stories.
They don't hold that...excitement, you know? You can't really get that feels because it's you so...they're basically controlling your feels. But when its an OC or regular character the emotion, drama, the feels, and stuff just make it more enjoyable.
Once again, I'm not saying you should stop reading these and stop making them because what the author is trying to do is give you the chance to relive your life with that character. The author wants to give you your own experience to be with that character, there isn't anything wrong with reading them. It's just sometimes I can't really...feel the story being more realistic.
I'll give you tips:
• I would be a better word instead of you.
• Add a bit more drama and emotion to it like your experiencing it.
•Authors- Act like you are that character in the story. Use the emotion that you feel onto that chapter.
I hope that helps in any way....
(I've been doing a lot of .... lately because I'm wondering where I'm going with this.)
Ja ne!
