Susie stood in the wintry landscape, bored and restless. The cold, icy surroundings seemed dull, with ancient statues standing silently amidst the snowy scenery. However, her attention was briefly captured by patches of brightly coloured grass, defiantly bringing vibrancy to the otherwise muted palette. Wrapped in Magolor's white-gray cape, she yearned for something or anything to happen in this frozen world, but without Magolor's horrible puns, it was quite peaceful, I mean she didn't even have to deal with the coldness of the snow due to Magolor's shield and cape warming her up.
She went to reach for her watch, maybe in the meantime she could fix it, but Susie grabbed something else instead, a piece of bread that she had saved. She was saving this bread just in case Magolor got hurt again or she became hungry but now that he had found a stash of food so she didn't need it anymore. She laughed softly to herself; this piece of bread would be the highlight of Susie's day when she was little. She was taken back to the time when she first got lost, being sucked into a portal and teleporting to a futuristic city, at first, she wandered the bustling streets, feeling utterly alone. The towering buildings and flashing lights only amplified her sense of isolation. She desperately cried out as tears streamed down her face for anyone to help her, Susie yearned to be in her father's comforting arms again, hoping he would magically appear, that he would hug her and take her home, promising that everything would be alright.
But no matter how much she cried nobody came and her pleas went unanswered, the only attention she'd get was weird looks from the bystanders. From that day onward she knew she could only rely on herself, wiping away her tears and determined to find her way back home by whatever means necessary to survive this cruel world. She had nothing to eat and would often starve herself on food and if she was desperate enough, she'd go looking in the garbage cans in the back alleyways for something to eat, even sleeping there since she had no home. Over the years she had changed into a girl who had trust issues and couldn't feel a single emotion at all, she had to steal, cheat and lie to survive up until now. When Susie got to this dimension, she took a chance to befriend Magolor when she realized she couldn't navigate the dimension alone. Despite his magical abilities, she found it challenging to get along with him due to his bad jokes, sarcasm, and overall annoying demeanor.
But over time, her negative thoughts of him washed away, replaced by a genuine care for Magolor's well-being, he was an adorable goofball. Susie marveled at his infectious enthusiasm and unwavering loyalty, it was something she had never seen before and was the key to thawing the icy barriers around her heart. In him, she had found a companion who challenged her, encouraged her, and showed her the beauty of genuine connection. Their friendship blossomed from there on, slowly but surely, she found herself telling Magolor about her hopes, dreams and fears. In Magolor, Susie found someone who didn't judge her for her cold exterior or the walls she had built around herself. He saw the person she could be beneath it all, and in his presence, she felt a warmth and acceptance she had long forgotten.
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Susie was almost tearing up just thinking about the past that she decided to go with Magolor in the portal to cheer herself up from this gloomy situation, hopefully she could help Magolor out in someway, other then getting sucked into a black hole....She rose from the rock she was sitting on, but her golden watch slipped from her pocket, the pieces scattering on the ground, Susie tries to pick it up in frustration, but her hair pin follows suit by falling out as well. Susie reaches for both items until a purple sphere doomer with piercing yellow eyes grabs her hair pin, flying off with it through the air, Susie curses under her breath and she quickly snatches the broken pieces of her watch and grabs her gun, unleashing a barrage of bullets at it. It evaded all of Susie's attacks as Susie's vision was being obstructed by her bright pink hair, but she was dead set on getting her golden hair pin back, so she brushed her hair aside and gave chase, continuously firing her gun. Despite her best efforts, the sphere Doomer continued to dodge her shots, much to Susie's growing annoyance. However, Susie needed to maintain composure to remain focused on recovering what was rightfully hers. Taking a deep breath, she reloaded her gun, refusing to let anger cloud her judgment.
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Trapped in dimensions: Magolor's journey to redemption
FanficA story of a trickster who gets karma for his actions, getting sent to literal hell and tries to find a way out to apologize to his friends. But he's not the only thing that's down here as he'll be fighting enemies left and right just to make it out...