ForEver ? or NevEr ?

present.

*first on the picture above is 'Alex' second 'Eliza' and third is 'Darren'*
Eliza POV.
"Hello? Darren? El here!"I tried to shout from the loud speakers playing at the background.
"Yea, El! I can hear you "I could barely hear his voice.
"Where are you? You were supposed to pick me up from this party, where did you run away?" I was pissed off, very angry at him, how do I even move out from here, I came here on his word, and now he vanished away.
"I am SO sorry El! I forgot!, actually am with Carmen "he said and it broke me to million pieces all over again .
"okay, don't worry ill go on my own, you enjoy "it hurt me so much to say this but I cannot get my feelings come in the way of his ,I love him doesn't mean he should love me back too !
"No! Are you crazy? El! Its "he paused maybe to check the time "1:30am! You are not leaving alone, just sit there for a bit, I'll leave Carmen at hers and come, okay?"
I sighed,
"okay."
I waited there, which seemed like forever, I checked the watch it was 3:00am, I guess he forgot. I can't be here, this place sucks ,I decided to leave ,I was a bit tipsy, maybe because of the beer, I don't really drink at all ,but I thought ren will be there so I did. I went on the street to take a taxi, but hell! This place was so unknown and isolated! I dint even bother to ask him where we were, I fumbled while walking ,so I removed my heels and started walking in some direction, from where I could get a taxi ,but there no single vehicle anywhere, I was feeling scared now, when I sensed someone behind me , oh my god ! No....no... please!
I turned round to see a tall man wearing a hoodie was standing just behind me, I was shaking with fear,
"hey there!"He said, in a friendly tone, as if he knew me. I kept my head down and started walking, best is not to face him at all, whoever he was. But it was not a good idea I guessed, as soon as I was yanked by my hand and turned harshly, my arm hurts, maybe ill get a bruise there in the morning, why me ? I don't even like parties!
Darren? Oh I hope he was okay. Or maybe he forgot? Yea he was with Carmen ofcourse he forgot .
"I guess I had said hello? Now where are your manners kid?"he said, pretending to be calm, but I could the annoyance in his voice.
"am sorry I guess you found the wrong person, sorry" and I tried to move my hand from his grasp. But he tightened it more.
"let me go !!! please!!!" I begged.
"I guess, I exactly found the right person" he replied and looked up, the light touched his face and I could see his annoying grin, and then something hard hit my head, and darkness started to engulf me and I fall dead on the ground and heard "that was quite easy, yea ?" ......
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Third person. POV,

such a beast, a man could ever get ! People are so selfish; they just don't care about others.
I was thinking about how the guy in the movie kicked his pregnant girlfriend out of the car so that her kid died. That was SO evil !!
okay.... I might be sounding like a girl, but I am quite sensitive when girls are harmed, one reason is because I could NEVER imagine my own most-beautiful-sister-in-the-world tessa, to face anything such evil. I shuddered at the mere thought. being caught up in my own thoughts I suddenly saw something lying at the side of the road, if my car headlights would not be on, I would have missed its sight, but as I came near, my eyes widened in shock and fear . there was a girl lying there down, passed out , or dead ?
i started to get nervous, I hope she is not dead. She could be hit by a car ? or ... raped ?
but she has her clothes on . so ?
pushing all the thoughts apart, I rushed over to look at her. I pulled her in my arms and saw that her head was bleeding, and her arms had some fine fresh scars, and her back was bleeding too . Maybe they thought she died, so they left her behind. Actually, thank god! They dint take her, or else the situation could be worse. I pulled her up,ignoring the blood stains on my hands and shirt and put her in the back of my car. I gently touched her side pockets so I could find her phone, and I found it in her right pocket. I looked through it, and thanked the holy gods up there that it was not locked by any intricate girly password. I checked the logs and saw a name called "ren" and a kiss at the side. Who can this 'ren' must be ? I quickly dialed that number from my phone, since hers was to die any moment.
it ringed atleast 5 times before it went to voicemail. I tried again, but first, I had to take her to the hospital , so I kept the phone aside and started driving.

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