ForEver ? or NevEr ?

present 2.

Darren.
I kissed her down her jaw line and she squeaked. God ! I hate when girls squeak, it just rings in my ears..eww, but I kissed her anyway. she was Carmen ,my girlfriend I don't even know why I am dating her...again after all that happened, I guess I don't even love her that way anymore, am so confused !!
! but I had to go .el must be waiting for me, I don't even know what time it is , I stopped abruptly
"babe, I really need to go, I have to pick up el, she would be waiting, and I really don't know if she is alright" at this she frowned and I became nervous.
she sighed and looked down .no no ! not those tantrums now !!!
"she...she is more important ? right, while making out with me, all you could think of was her ? really ?" she said. There it goes !!
"no, I was not thinking of her !."I said.
"you just have to go don't you ?" she spat angrily
"I don't know what time is it, but I guess I could be up for another hour, but then I have to go, okay?" I sighed and she nodded happily. Those tantrums. Uhh !!!
And then I ended up in her room. Loosing track of time. Soon I heard my phone ring, to a formal ringtone, telling me it was a unkown number, being so buzy in my act I let it ring, after laying back down, exhausted, I tried to close my eyes and sleep, and the first thought in my mind occurred
ELIZA !!!!!!
I shot up from the bed, picked up my clothes and did not bother to look at a very confussed and irritated Carmen.
"ELIZA !" I told her as I left her room. And I heard her sigh irritatingly. I don't know why she dint like el . anyways . I checked my phone and saw 2 missed calls from an unkown number. I called back. After some rings a guy picked up .
"hello?" he said,
"hello, this is Darren, I received 2 missed calls from this number," I asked confused.
"OH YES!" he said as if he suddenly realized something very important
."but, tell me who you are, and do u recognize this number". He said with a stern tone .
"what?" hes gottu be fucking kidding me. At 4:30 in the morning, he has to be asking to identify numbers ? I don't even know his name !!!
"8456-33-693" he said .
holy shit !
that was the number I could recognize from any place on earth or universe .
" eliza !!!!!" panick hit me .
"who the hell are you?"I asked him angrily.
"no. who the hell are YOU , and how do you belong to her?" he spat angrily.
"am her bestfriend, please just tell me, the hell's going on?" I begged
"ohh, come at city hospital, you where the last person she'd called and since her phone was dead I called you from mine, her condition is really bad, if you can please contact her parents too" he said and hung up.
I could not speak a word .
this is ALL because of me . SHIT !!! am such an asshole !! I should have not taken her to the party yet alone leave her there. Shit shit shit !!! I deserve to die !!
I reached the hospital in 15 mins and called him again
"floor 3, 0337 room number." he said directly
"thanks"
I have never climbed the stairs so fast in my life.
03 was the floor code, I could see all room numbers starting with it. I quickly found the room and pushed open the door and saw,
a tall guy sitting on one of the stool, holding her hand,
and then I looked at her. She had bandage all over her head and arms and there was an IV that was attached . my heart broke seeing her like that.
asshole.
"alex" he said and shook hands.
"thankyou ! so so much ! you really owe me a big time." I said
"no I don't, It was my duty, but you seem to be too close, I searched for her mom or dad's number but nothing came up. The hostpital needs a relative" alex said.
" she does not have parents" I stated "I am all she's got" I said ashamed of myself.
"then you are really careless about your friend, or maybe you care least"he shrugged. And I hold him by his collar.
"what ? did I say anything wrong?,she called you freaking 15 times, and I found her at the corner of a road dying, do you even realize how far that could have gone?" he spat angrily.
he was right, he was so fucking right !!!! .
"this is all my fault !" I said to myself again
"I just hope my sister never gets a friend like you,and that I always be there for her" he said in a irritated voice.
we were waiting outside, while the doctors carried out some tests. After an hour or two they came out . before I could even get up, alex hoped to his side .
"is she okay ? " he said and I nodded .
" I am afraid she is not" he said and walked away.
I fell back on my seat, and put my face in my hand and alex seemed terrified.
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A/N : 
  i separated the first chapter into two, as it seemed to be quite big.
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