It could've been better but I think it's pretty decent. Could've for example added some angelic elements.
Title: 8/10
It fits very well especially considering the main character Y/n's personality and what the story's about.
Story description: 7/10
I really like it. It really piques one's curiosity. Makes you wonder what will happen and everything means.
Concept or plot: 7/10
I think it's a good plot.
Pace: 6/10
Pretty decent. Sometimes it's a bit fast though. One minute this is happening and the next that but again I think it's pretty good. Not too fast or too slow.
Character development: 6/10
Good but sometimes they change a little too fast. They're cold and all of a sudden they're warm. Like how they don't even really know Y/n but they're really nice to her.
Grammar or vocabulary: 5/10
I think it needs a bit of work. There are a few mistakes here and there. Like spelling mistakes and words that aren't there. It's nothing big but it would help to make reading the story easier and smoother.
Writing style: 8/10
I like it. I don't really have anything else to add about it.
Matching the given genre:8/10
Fits. Definitely fits.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
I really enjoyed reading. I've never read a story like it. It was really fun.
Total: 72/100
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