But few members face looks little weird. Like they look kinda old
Title : 9/10
The name is really unique. I didn't understand what that rapping part resembles but the title is really eye catching
Story description : 8/10
It is good enough to create curiosity among the readers to read it
Concept or plot : 10/10
I really loved the mystery fun concept
Pace : 6/10
Sometimes It feels little slow
Character development : 5/10
Namjoon's character was good. Others were good but not that Deep
Grammar or vocabulary : 10/10
Didn't found any mistake. You have a really rich vocabulary and you can describe things very nicely
Writing style : 10/10
It was good and very clear.
Matching the given Genre : 10/10
It matches the genre perfectly
Overall enjoyment : 7/10
The concept was Fun. Your writing style was good. The story looks promising
Sometimes it felt like the story was going slow
Some characters didn't had much depth and was kinda ok . In some chapters the thrilling factor was missing
I only had read few chapters and it still has a lot more so things might be different now but if in the first few chapters the characters were introduced more properly, like you had talked more about their looks and personalities and if there was cliffhangers or something that's makes people impatient to read more , That would have made the story better
It was really refreshing to see this kind of concept
You are doing good. Keep going 🩷🩷
Total : 85/100
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