The story is all about warriors and battles so yes the cover matches the story perfectly. I loved this cover
Title : 10/10
They all are captives in love and the title really suits this well
Story description : 6.5/10
Story description is nice but it will be better if you write some lines more clearly. It's little hard to understand
Concept or plot : 10/10
The concept is great. This is a really interesting story
Pace : 6/10
I felt it was going slow
Character development : 8/10
The characters are great. You did introduced them nicely but they are little hard to imagine. If you also used some kind of pictures it will be better
Grammar or vocabulary : 9/10
Impressive but few words are very hard to pronounce for those who's first language isn't English just like me. You can sometimes use easier words. So the understanding process will get better
Writing style : 10/10
Writing style is really impressive. You can describe things like emotions, actions etc amazingly
Matching the given Genre : 10/10
It matches the story perfectly
Overall enjoyment : 8.5/10
I liked reading this story. It got a really interesting plot. The title and cover is perfection
I felt it was going slow and could be faster. Also use images and easy words sometimes. If you do that this story will be perfect
Total : 88/100
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