It's really good but doesn't match the story fully. the cover kinda gives feel like the story has some kind of dark elements
Title : 5/10
Sorry but the title doesn't suit the story much. It sounds like the opposite of what the story actually is
Story description : 7/10
It is good but was little confusing in some lines. It would have been better if you write it with more clear words
Concept or plot : 9/10
It was interesting how you connected that string concept with this story
Grammar or vocabulary : 7/10
Grammer mistakes are there but not too many. Can be improved
Sometimes use some words that are easier to understand. Like words we use in daily life
Writing style : 10/10
It was nice. I can easily understand when that people are talking. I liked your narrative style
Pace : 6/10
I think the story is going little slow
Character development : 4/10
Characters are nice but there wasn't any chapters where their personality was described. If someone doesn't know seventeen they can never understand their personality
Matching the given genre : 10/10
Itmatches the genre perfectly
Overall enjoyment : 5/10
The concept was good and writing style was really good. You are good with words just need to use easy to understand words more
It was really confusing with the characters as I don't know seventeen personally and it becomes really hard to understand what is going on. Characters need to improve The beginning was ok type. It would have been better if it started with describing the place or the people etc etc
Good luck
Total : 71/10
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