It is a really good cover But while the title gave a sad story vibe that cover gave sometimes a little more happy story vibe
Title : 9.5/10
It's a nice title but it might look better without (?) Sign and author name
Story description : 9.5/10
This is good and gave me enough information
Concept or plot : 9/10
The concept is nice. It does gives a kdrama feel
Pace : 9.5/10
The pace is fine
Character development: 10/10
I love how you introduced the characters at the first chapter. They are really interesting
Grammar or vocabulary : 7/10
Didn't found any mistakes
One thing confused me was they were sometimes talking in Korea and sometimes in English I didn't understand if they normally use English even if they are at Korea or anything else
It gives a feel like they are actually not speaking Korean. Just sometimes speak korean
Writing style: 10/10
You can describe things really good and your writing style is really clear.
Matching the given Genre: 10/10
It matches the genre perfectly
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I liked the kdrama vibe. I enjoyed seeing the characters
I'm little confused with the Korean parts here and there. It would have been better if you used other kind of names for chapters instead of using someone name and part 1, part 2 etc
I enjoyed reading it
You are doing good. keep going 🩷🩷
Total: 91.5/100
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