The book cover looks beautiful. Matches the story. Creates curiosity
Title : 10/10
Unique title. Tells what the story is about without telling everything
Story description : 9/10
It's good but some spaces in the middle felt too long
Concept or plot : 8/10
Nice concept
Pace : 6/10
I felt like it was going slow
Character development : 6/10
Characters on their own are good but there wasn't any proper introduction for them. There wasn't enough description about their personality and appearance, which made it harder to imagine those characters
Grammar or vocabulary : 8/10
You have a really rich vocabulary which is a very good thing and many people enjoy this. But this story might not be for everyone as the words are very high level. It gives a poetic feel and poetry is harder to understand than normal sentences. It's not always like this but some places are like that. So it will be hard for a some people
Writing style : 10/10
The book's writing style is really good. It's so clean and elegant.
Matching the given Genre : 10/10
It matches perfectly
Overall enjoyment : 7/10
As my first language isn't English, many words were hard for me to understand. Also I felt it should go a little faster so it could grow more curiosity among readers. I also want to see more about their past life
It is a good story. Keep going 🩷🩷
Total : 84/100
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