Beyond the Sun

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Now this poem is not as obviously religious as my other poems in this collection but see if you can figure out what the religious message is behind it and leave your interpretation in the comment section :) Thank you for reading, voting, and commenting!!

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The Sun Beyond

by Marjac


A wall looms ahead,

Still, cold as the dead;

The weeds reach up

With hope, in worship

But their savior is naught

But a foe. False. An idol, handwrought.

The wall blocks their true salvation;

The sun, their mother sighs with vexation

But the weeds are blind,

They remain twined

Around the bricks like lovers,

Consigning themselves to their captors.

They fade away and die,

still believing in the lie

That beyond there is no sky

And that beyond,

No weeds flourish

That none thrive, none multiply.

There, walled, they die,

Limp with malnourish.

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