Book: Wizarding Royalty
Author: Livvie_Heart
Reviewer: WarmCupofSparkles12
Chapters read: 2
0. Wizarding Royalty
Pacing: 10/10
A nice pace and a lot of characters (and roles) might I add.
Characters: 10/10
I don't have much to say regarding this and the characters, but what I can say is that I find the Greek Mythology/Percy Jackson (ahhh my favorite book series from 4th grade) and Harry Potter crossover an interesting thing. I can't wait to see how this goes.
World building: 10/10
Again, I like how we got a heads-up for the things going on. And I'm sorry- Harry Potter?! I know for a fact this is gonna be good. Don't mind me because I haven't finished all the movies. I'm stuck on the Goblet of Fire with my sister. 🙂
I. There's Royals?
Pacing: 10/10
Nice and suspenseful at the start. I wonder if the room they were in was nice and dark to give it that eerie feeling. I also find the way the chapter is written to be very nice, portraying the character dialogue greatly.
Characters: 9/10
I like the minor character descriptions like for the elegant woman that sat beside Elladora, Alexandra Clawhark. And by the way, the names are quite interesting. Again, the ties between Greek Mythology/Percy Jackson and Harry Potter are interesting. (tbh I've never seen it before)
World building: 8/10
This might be based on personal experience, but I have no clue what "Number 12 Grimmauld Place" means. Maybe it's because I haven't read or watched the Order of the Phoenix yet? Please don't take it personally, though. ^_^
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