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March 1959,
MumbaiBhavesh POV:
I step out of my class room followed by my best friend/ brother-in-law Darshan. We both are of the same age just with few month's difference. After completing 12th, I was in dilemma of what to do. Later I found out Darshan (Jaya's elder brother) is going to Mumbai to do B.com. I followed his suite and got admission in the same college as his. This was one of the best decision of mine as I got to learn more and found my interest.
Over this 3 year of time span we have grown close to each other. When our parent's found out that we intend to go to Mumbai, they buyed us an apartment which will be enough for both of us. Well, we or mostly he learned how to cook. Don't judge even I can cook some food but they are basic and plain unlike his who makes dish as if he is a professional chef.
We both were crossing the gates of our college when we heard my little brother's voice. Yup you guessed it right he also followed us. Now we all stay in same apartment which luckily have 3 bedrooms and I don't have to share my room with this suvaar (pig) or else he would have never let me sleep peacefully.
Whereas me and Darshan are in 3rd year Keshav is in his 1st year. Mine and Darshan's exam will start from next week and we came here to collect our hall tickets whereas Keshav's last exam completed today.
In this 8 years of time span being in touch with my Jayu was very difficult. First of all, we weren't allowed to write letters or talk on home telephone. For starting years our only communication source was my brother. As whenever my family visit Jaya and her family on festivals or any important occasions he would forward my letters to her secretly and she would do the same.
But now as me and Darshan stays in same place, I sometimes write her letter and hide it in Darshan's letter cover for her. We have secret phone calls in which Darshan helps us. I have also seen her photo. And it would be a lie if I say she hasn't transformed into a more matured woman. She still is cute but *cough* a bit sexy.
There is not much I can say from photos but I will see her soon. Our wait will be over in few months. I am very happy about it.
When we entered inside our apartment first thing Keshav did was to throw his bag on sofa and go to him room to sleep his as off. I tell you this guy can sleep for hours and yet be sleepy.
After freshening up I was chopping vegetables as we all are in mood of some Pulao and Kaddhi. Darshan was washing rice and my dear brother is still sleeping. In the middle of our chores, we heard a doorbell ring and assuming that must be our house help I went out to open it. Welcoming maushi (aunt in Marathi) I went to fold my clothes and start my studies.
While I was doing so our home telephone rang, I picked it up knowing it must be from our families. I greeted "Hello. Jaijinendra" I heard my Father-in-law's voice replying to my greeting warmly. We exchanged pleasantries and asked about each other's wellbeing. Later he asked me about Darshan to which I replied he is in kitchen and if there is something urgent, I can call him he declined and said "Bhavesh beta just pass him the news that his marriage date has been fixed. It will be one day prior to yours and Jaya." Hearing him I get shocked. Well Bhavesh was set to marry after Jaya's arrival 8 years back, but a week before their wedding Bhabhi's Dadi (paternal grandma) unfortunately died. Henceforth their wedding got cancelled and the next muhurta was of after 8 years. Replying to my father-in-law that I will inform Bhavesh about it he kept the phone.
Hurriedly I went to the kitchen opened the steel container which has some sweet in it I shove it in Darshan's mouth. He stunned for a minute started chewing it hurriedly and drank a glass of water, and asked or more like shouted "Have you gone mad? Why would you shove an entire piece of sweet in my mouth without warning. Duffer" hearing him I thought that maybe this sibling's favourite word is 'duffer' every time saying that to me. But keeping that aside I hugged him and said "Sasurji called your marriage has been fixed just one day prior to mine and Jaya's"
He opened his mouth like a fish gasping for water. After few seconds or minute the news sanked into him and he hugged me and shouted "Yesssss... I won't be a bachelor anymore. I will be getting married to my Deepu." He crazily loves Bhabhi for years he was waiting for this moment. He wants to express his love for Bhabhi but can't yet because they aren't married. I know it won't the case after their marriage.
Hearing to commotion Keshav magically got up from his sweet slumber (note the sarcasm) and asked in a sleepy voice "Why are you both shouting? Can't you let me sleep in peace." hearing him we both flicked his forehead and later shared the good news. He was equally happy as he also knows the deep feelings of darshan for Deepti Bhabhi.
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After a month,
Author's POV:
Bhavesh, Keshav and Darshan are on their way to Kutch. They will get down on same station later will take public transports to reach their village. As it is their suprise visit no one from their family is on station to receive it. Bhavesh and Darshan have decided that they will break the news of their decision of staying in Mumbai and starting their business together. Knowing their family it will be a-bit hard for them to get convinced but later they will cave in.
When they reached their respective house, they were showered with love and affection. Food of their preference was made on instant. And during dinner both Bhavesh and Darshan dropped the bombshell. Entire day of Bhavesh and Darshan went on convincing their parents and grandparents. Both the family were sceptical as after few months both Bhavesh and Darshan has to take upon their responsibility as husbands.
The next day a phone call between Prem (Bhavesh's Father) and Suresh (Darshan's Father) was shared. They talked about the decision of their sons. Later by the end of the call they both decide to give them a chance to prove themselves. As both aldready had a house in Mumbai so both Jaya and Deepti won't have any problem to stay in.
The decision was later shared in the family.Bhavesh and Darshan were over the moon as they were one step close to theirdream. They were thankful for their family to support them. Equal share ofprofit was contributed by Prem and Suresh for their business. All were wishingfor their success.
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