chronicles of Amina

A week of anticipation

Chapter 7

The rest of the week passed by in a blur for Amina. She attended school, trying to focus on her studies, but her mind kept wandering back to Omar and the upcoming dinner at the Al-Fayed residence.

On Wednesday, she had a close call with a classmate, Rachel, who had been making snide comments about Amina's hijab. Amina, usually reserved and calm, felt her temper flare up, but she took a deep breath and walked away, remembering her Islamic values of patience and forgiveness.

Her friends, Zeebu, Amrah, and Baby, noticed her distress and rallied around her. "You did the right thing, Amina," Zeebu said. "You can't let people like Rachel get to you."

Amina smiled weakly, grateful for her friends' support.

The next day, Saturday, arrived, and Amina felt a mix of emotions: excitement, nervousness, and a hint of curiosity. She had been looking forward to this day all week, and finally, it was here. She put on her best hijab and outfit, making sure she looked modest and presentable.

Her family arrived at the Al-Fayed residence, a grand mansion that took Amina's breath away. The mansion was a grand, modern structure with sleek lines and minimalist design. The exterior was adorned with intricate Arabic calligraphy and geometric patterns, reflecting the family's Middle Eastern heritage.

Amina's eyes widened as they pulled up to the entrance, a stunning fountain and beautifully manicured gardens catching her attention. The sound of softly burbling water and chirping birds filled the air.

As they stepped out of the car, Amina couldn't help but feel a sense of awe at the sheer scale and beauty of the mansion. Her father, ever the gentleman, offered his arm, and they walked towards the entrance together.

The massive wooden doors swung open, revealing a spacious foyer with a stunning chandelier.

Here is the revised chapter:

The massive wooden doors swung open, revealing a spacious foyer with a stunning chandelier. Sheikh Al-Fayed and Omar stood waiting, resplendent in their formal attire.

"Assalamu alaykum, welcome to our home," Sheikh Al-Fayed said, his voice warm and inviting.

Amina's father replied, "Wa alaykum assalam, thank you for having us."

Omar stepped forward, his eyes scanning the group. "Assalamu alaykum, Mr. and Mrs. Yusuf madaki, it's a pleasure to see you again. And Amina, welcome."

Amina smiled, feeling a little shy. "Wa alaykum assalam, Omar. Thank you."

Omar's gaze lingered on Amina for a moment before he turned to her parents. "Please, come in. We've been expecting you."

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