EXT. - THE PEARLY GATES
First panel:
(Just the lovely background of heavenly clouds by the pearly gates.)
Second panel:
CLAIRE
(Suddenly appears. A tall, human-looking woman with brown hair that's tied back in a braid except for two triangular shaped buns on the top of her head. Her eyes are amber, her skin is nearly white. She seems wary/surprised.)
Third panel:
CLAIRE
(looks up at the pearly gates)
Fourth panel:
Claire
"Am I..."
EXT. - THE PEARLY GATES
First panel:
CLAIRE
"...shit."
ST. PETER
(from off screen)
"Hold on I forgot my--"
Second panel:
ST. PETER
(looks surprised)
"Oh you're early! That aha, that never happened before! I wasn't expecting
anyone for another hour so...there go my lunch plans! Which I never get invited to..."
Third panel:
CLAIRE
(backs up)
"I am not supposed to be here."
Fourth panel:
ST. PETER
(thumbs off to the side.)
"Of course you are or you wouldn't be
here you'd be, aha, down there you know so."
EXT. - THE PEARLY GATES
First panel:
CLAIRE
(looks down off the clouds)
ST. PETER
"If I could just get your name..."
Second panel:
ST. PETER
(with his book looks up. Claire has gotten further away.)
"Hey, hey, don't get to close to the edge--"
Third panel:
CLAIRE
(puts her arms out and falls back)
ST. PETER
(runs forward)
"Hey, stop!"
Fourth panel:
ST. PETER
(stands at the edge of the cloud looking down, clutching his book)
"That's a first."
EXT. - THE SKY
First panel:
CLAIRE
(is falling and screaming)
"AHHHHHHHHHH!"
Second panel:
CLAIRE
(is falling and screaming)
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
Third panel:
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A Murder in Hell (A Hazbin Hotel Fanfic)
FanfictionHow can life be more complicated after you're dead? Determined to make sense of an otherwise chaotic afterlife, newly deceased Claire tries to come to terms with a whole new reality that offers more questions than answers--especially about herself...
