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I could really use some feedback and on what to do.

If there is anything you don't like in this book just give me a message and I am welcome to change it, after all it is you lot reading this book.

If there's anything that I could do better in this book please please tell me on how I can.

I was also thinking about changing the character who plays Ines but I need to see what you all think about it.

I was thinking of changing the Ines character now to Leah Halton.

If you don't know who that is or what she looks likes this is her here :

If you don't know who that is or what she looks likes this is her here :

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Or should I keep this character :

Im obviously gonna keep Jeremiah as he is

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Im obviously gonna keep Jeremiah as he is.

I was also thinking about the book cover.

Or

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Or

 If you do decide to change the character to Leah Halton I will ovbiously put a picture of her on rather than the original on the cover on the 2nd one

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If you do decide to change the character to Leah Halton I will ovbiously put a picture of her on rather than the original on the cover on the 2nd one.

Please tell me on what to do as I am stuck.

I'm also going to add more cast pictures as I need to add more people to the cast who is going to be in this book.

Thank you.

~Laylaxybae

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