𝘼𝙜𝙖𝙧 𝙏𝙪𝙢 𝙆𝙖𝙝𝙤 [𝘽𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙 𝙗𝙮 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚]

~ 𝘾𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙚𝙧 13 ❥

इस लम्हे को रोक दूँ
या मैं ख़ुद को इसमें झोंक दूँ?
क्या करूँ? क्या करूँ? क्या करूँ?
इस लम्हे में मैं कुछ भी जानूँ ना

नैना-नैना लागे, नैना-नैना लागे
नैना-नैना लागे, नैना-नैना लागे

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As the four of them stepped outside and moved toward the wall they planned to climb, Yug stopped abruptly. He peeked through a gap, scanning the empty road for any sign of Hridya and Krishav. The street was eerily silent, with not a single person in sight.

"Kaha gye yeh dono? he asked, his brows furrowed in confusion as he turned back toward the group.

[Where did those two go?]"

"Tune kaha tha na ki woh bahar chale gye honge?" Raghav asked, his tone edged with mild irritation.

[Didn't you say they must've gone outside?]

"Haan, bola tha... par main sure nahi tha. Darwaza khula tha, isliye laga-wait, let me just call Krish." Yug began pulling out his phone, but Janki's alarmed voice stopped him.

[Yeah, I said that... but I wasn't sure. The door was open, so I thought-wait, let me just call Krish.]

"No, no! Agar dono abhi bhi andar hue, toh ringtone se gadbad ho jayegi!" Janki whispered hurriedly, throwing a nervous glance at the building.