Peter's Fire (OUAT)

Chapter 25

Okay so apparently my chapter shuffled themselves so just make sure you read chapter 20-24 before this thx!
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Danielle's POV
I saw the Jolly Rodger from the shore and was thinking about how to get there. I tugged on a piece of braided rope around my neck and looked down at the vial attached to it. Inside was enough pixie dust to get two people out of Neverland but I didn't want to waste any one the trip to the boat. I quickly tucked it inside of my shirt when I saw that someone was rowing to me. He had on a red hat and was very fat, I naturally assumed he was Mr.Smee. I waited until the boat got ashore and hopped in to see a huffing and puffing fat man with glasses falling off his face. He had sweat stains under his arms and stunk of fish. He held up a finger asking for a minute and I took this as the universal language for I need help. I took both oars and started rowing to she ship. Smee didn't look shocked but he did try. He grabbed one of the oars I had and I took my hand off and we rowed back together. It was a faster process and we tended to turn the direction of my oar since I was going faster but he sorted it out every time. Mr. Smee started talking about where he was from and what he did before becoming a pirate. I didn't add much to the conversation I only answered what I was asked. By the time we had reached the Jolly Rodger he had said he considered me a new friend and I said I considered him an older chuck.

Mr. Smee's POV
The girl was very strong and nice to help with the boat. I whistled to signal our arrival and stopped rowing. Danielle did too and we waited to be pulled into the boat. Once we were pulled aboard I ran to the captains cabin to see the boy Chuck and tell the captain the girl was here.

Danielle's POV
I was pulled onto the deck of the ship by some of Hook's crew members. I was waiting for hook to show up, and I was getting impatient. Eventually since the crew paid me no attention I snuck off to find Chuck. If they weren't going to guard him correctly then they don't deserve my attention.
I crept to the back of the ship where the brig should be. I assumed that's where they were keeping him. I snuck down the stairs of the rocking boat only to be disappointed.

Chuck wasn't there.

I thundered up the stairs to the deck and looked around frantically. Finally I spotted something, the captains cabin.
I rushed over knocking over pirates like bowling pins and yanked open the door. There was Chuck sitting in a chair.
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Okay so I know I haven't updated in a long time but this is my first book on watt pad and I feel like I have made a lot of mistakes. I have been trying to fix them but haven't been very successful so I wanted to ask you guys weather you wanted me to continue the story or delete it and remake it better. all up to the comments. I know u guys don't comment much but I do get the occasional comment that pushes me to update so thx for that. I know I can make this story better but if you don't care about the bad beginning just let me know. okay bye and thx for reading!