After the Death Cure

Sample

Okay so my friend wants a Cheesy Thomesa fanficton with so much romance and jealousy. I said sure why not so should I or shouldn't? Here is the sample, please enjoy because over time I will be deleting this.

Chapter 1 (Teresa's POV )

I just moved to this town called Springfield. I'm 18 years old and I'm living by my own because mysteriously my parents were murder and no one knew who did it. I was just 9 when they were reported missing. I lived with my grandmother until she died and now I live by myself. I moved because my old town was too sad for me and poof! I'm in Springfield!!! This is my last year in high school so it's gonna be a tuff year! I enter the doors to the school and see many eyes on me. I wave at them and say "Hello!" They wave back and continue on what they were doing. I keep walking until I'm alone and lost. I was making my way towards the principals office when one blonde hair British boy grabbed my arm and said" Be quite don't scream. I'm not gonna hurt you." I nod terrified. "What pack are you from?" he says to me. "Pack?!" I say. "Oh God!" he says. He lets go of me and lifts his hands in his hair like he's thinking what to do next. "Okay, listen carefully Teresa Agnes." he begins. I freeze. He knows my name!!! How the hell?!!! "You are being watch for protection. Oh boy, wait till you meet him." and then he's gone. Okay I have six words to say about what just happened.
WHAT
THE
HELL
WAS
THAT?!!!!!!
I'm so scared to hell right now! Even my knees are trembling. I run down the hallway and see the principals office! Thank God!

~At lunch~
All eyes are at me. Girls eyeing me with jealousy while boys trying so hard not to check me out. This cute Asian dude comes to me and says "You're soon gonna meet him." and leaves.
Who the hell is he talking about?!!! I see a few boys look at me with concern even that Asian and British boy are there! The hell?!!! I lost my a-pitied and left the cafeteria.

~At home~

Finally after a crazy and weird day at school I'm home!!!! Knock Knock!! My head looks at the door like if it's about to attack me. I cautiously walk to the door and open it. There's a letter. I grab it and shut the door. I open the letter and it says
You Belong to me.
Who the hell?!!!! I'm so scared that I grab the letter and lock it up in the drawer. I'm so scared, the way the kids were looking at me at school, the two boys!!! Oh GOD!!!!

~Next Day~
No school!!! YAY!!!! I open my eyes and I wish I didn't open it because when I turn my face to the side. A boy my age with a black leather jacket, jeans, black converse, and very chocolate brown eyes is staring at me. He's sitting in one of my chairs. "Ah!!" I scream covering myself with my puff blankets and throwing a hard pillow at him. I hear him growl and say "You shouldn't have done that." I shiver under my covers and say "What do want?" I hear him chuckle and say "Why Teresa, I'm not here to hurt you." I slowly remove my blankets off me and say "So what do you want?" I look at him now standing. "Look at me in the eye Teresa." I do. Wow I feel like I'm safe and sound when I look at him. Why? "Give me your hand." he says softly. I slowly do and when our hands touch I feel so much electricity between me and him. I just want to kiss him. But why? I pull it back and say "What was that?" The boy looks at me and grins "Teresa Agnes, you and I are mates. That means we were destined for each other. Chose by the Moon Goddess. I, Thomas Murphy alpha of the Royal Blood pack am your mate." he says. So that means.... "I'm a werewolf and your mate ." I whisper. "Yes you are Deedee." Thomas replies to me. Deedee, he knows.

How was it? Should I make the book yes or no? Also yeah it's about werewolves!!! Yay!!!!