White Candle

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The candle's wick is lit

The wind blows gently

The wax melts 

dripping down its sides

The people grumble within the cavern

Too dark

Too little light

The wind blows strongly

The flame dances

molten wax pools at the base

More grumbling

The flame flickers

More complain

The winds grow stronger

The light dies

Smoke tendrils float up

The cave a silent tomb

A breeze passes

The telltale gray vanishes

The little ones cry in the dark

The older ones stay mute.


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