Standing right behind her, I got more than a glimpse this time. The light glistened on her skin. I couldn’t do anything else but stare.
Her head still in the fridge, oblivious, she called over her shoulder, “What would you like to do while we wait for dinner to cook? Would you like me to get you a drink? What do you want?”
She stayed bent over, waiting for my answer, as I was mesmerised by the vision right in front of me. What do I want? “I want to bend you over that bench, drop my shorts and fuck you from behind,” I blurted out.
I should have asked for a beer. At least I’d get that.
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Have you reached this point in Ocean's Gift? Did you wonder what comes next?
A very detailed scene was cut here, at my editor's request. Yet I kept a copy, wondering if anyone would want to read it.
If your answer is a loud, resonant, "Yes!" then I'd like to ask for your help.
If I'm to share the never-before-seen sex scenes from Ocean's Gift, I'd like you to share something with the world. I'd like you to tell me and all the other readers what YOUR favourite part in Ocean's Gift is.
Click on the external link to the right of the story and it'll take you to the Amazon page for Ocean's Gift. For some reason, the external link says "Buy this on Amazon!" but I'm only asking you to review it. PLEASE leave your review, telling me about your favourite part of Ocean's Gift, and giving me as many stars as you conscionably can. I love stars - with or without my telescope. :D
After that, could you let me know you've done it? Once I get ten confirmed reviews on Ocean's Gift, I'll post the first cut scene. Twenty reviews, and the second one goes live.
If not many people want the scenes, that's okay. I'll take this book down and leave you to wonder what Vanessa replied to Joe's blurted-out proposition.
But you'll miss out on finding out what use raspberries, ice and croissants are...
Your call. What's YOUR favourite bit of Ocean's Gift?
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A Drop in the Ocean
General Fiction"There's too much sex in this book!" my editor told me. "Get rid of some of the sex scenes in Ocean's Gift!" I did, but I always wondered if maybe some readers wanted the uncut version - or at least the dropped scenes. From what some of my readers h...
