Warriors: A Burning Hope (Book 3) by The_Warrior_Writer

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The_Warrior_Writer

WarriorsInterviews is here again with another Warriors fanfiction review!
Leopardclaw is doing this review.

LC: First is the Allegiances. "Allegiances" is spelled wrong and the format is incorrect.

Clan should be capitalized...names are, uh...interesting...no points here for spelling, Allegiances format, etc.

The next thing is the first chapter...some grammar errors, but the names are in the correct format with a prefix and suffix...+10 points for correct name format!

Current Score: 10 points

LC: There are barely any errors in spelling...less in grammar now...+20 points for that improvement!

Current Score: 30 points

LC: +20 points for a good introduction.

Current Score: 50 points

LC: It's difficult to find more, but +40 points for consistently great spelling and grammar!

Final Score: 90 points

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