Leopardclaw: Oh this one has 67 chapters. Dear StarClan, save me from this review.
Allegiances is spelled wrong ("Allegianges"), so no points for that.
The Allegiances is formatted correctly, though, so 50 points for that.
Current Score: 50 points
Leopardclaw: Prologue set after the Allegiances, 20 points!
Current Score: 70 points
Leopardclaw: Chapters are pretty short, so that explains why there's 67 of them. No extra points for that.
Current Score: 70 points (no change from Prologue-Chapter 1
Leopardclaw: Kittypets! Extra 10 points for originality so far!
WAIT A MINUTE THIS CAT HAS WINGS. OH DEAR STARCLAN NO! MINUS 60 POINTS FOR WINGED CATS!
Current Score: 10 points
Leopardclaw: No extra points for Chapter 3.
Current Score: 10 points (no change from Chapter 2-Chapter 3)
Leopardclaw: I can't even keep reading this knowing there are wings on this cat throughout the entire thing. Goodbye.
Final Score: 10 points
Leopardclaw: in background of the place she reviews the fanfics from What in the Dark Forest gave Aspen the idea to give a cat WINGS!?
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