Leopardclaw: So obviously this one was a complete parody, or at least that's what some people assume by the StarClan-awful writing it contains. Allegiances are called "Alliances", so we may actually need to DOCK points instead of adding. -1 for wrong Allegiances title.
Current Score: -1 points
Leopardclaw: Allegiances have JayFeather capitalized as such, missing t in she-cat under Sandstorm, so -2 points.
Current Score: -3 points
Leopardclaw: DEAR STARCLAN THE CAPITALIZATION! -20 points
Current Score: -23 points
Leopardclaw: "The last 2 r starKits siters", no, please, no. -10 points for making me read that.
Current Score: -33 points
Leopardclaw: "(shes a different cat then the one in tC ok?)" Minus 10 points for that unneeded comment.
Current Score: -43 points
Leopardclaw: OH DEAR STARCLAN THE CHAPTER ONE PROLOGUE IS TITLED "Chpater oen prouloge"! WHO SIGNED ME UP FOR THIS REVIEWING JOB? looks at contract that doesn't exist Oh I did. Welp, let's dock those 5 points!
Current Score: -48 points
Leopardclaw: The capitalization and punctuation needs to go in the Dark Forest or they already have been there. -10 points.
Current Score: -58 points
Leopardclaw: Spacing in Chapter to the rose of a Heroin is bad. "Ohmigosh its my serimony", "exercisedly", "squelled", "cot", need I say more? -30 points for spelling hell.
Current Score: -88 points
Leopardclaw: Well it clearly says "REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan!", but I'm not sure what's going to be hit over the head as it's not specified, so I think we're safe from whatever "reveiewing" we're doing here.
Current Score: -88 points (no points added; just a side comment)
Leopardclaw: Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln. -5 for that spelling and stuff.
Current Score: -93 points
Leopardclaw: "stop flmaing the stroy!"? Okay, sure let's go with that. What Twolegs are "flmaing" this "stroy"? None? Okay moving on.
The spelling, dear god.
"ples no more flam". Nope, let's dock 50 points.
Current Score: -143 points
Leopardclaw: How is this still Chapter Three? There are two Chapter Threes? What the Dark Forest?!
Oh they got really hurt from the flames, so let's go ahead and give em a -1 for good measure.
Current Score: -144 points
Leopardclaw: WAIT THERE ARE 34 CHAPTERS?! I HAVE NO TIME FOR THIS, GOODBYE STARKIT'S PROPHECY YOU DARK FOREST FANFIC! -100 points
Final Score: -244 points
Leopardclaw: I have nothing more to say on this.
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