WIN Warrior Fanfiction Reviews

Curled Silence by MyseriousCurl

WarriorsInterviews here! Leopardclaw will be reviewing "Curled Silence" by MysteriousScrub (or MysteriousCurl like they are usually called) as requested by ScrubFlame (or chromeflame as he is usually called).
Here we go!

Leopardclaw: The first thing I like to look for in a Warriors fanfiction is the Allegiances. I like to know what the cats look like, what Clan they are in, their names, etc. This book starts out with the Allegiances, so MysteriousCurl, you get 10 points for that.

Current Score: 10

Leopardclaw: The next thing I look for in a Warriors fanfiction is accuracy. The spelling, grammar, and connection to the Warriors series all play into this.

The Allegiances look great so far, no errors in spelling, grammar, or the warrior names.

The Clan names are in the right format, the Allegiances format is correct, and I notice that Curl is going for a sequel to Bramblestar's Storm, which was written by the Erin Hunter author group.

The rest of the Allegiances look great and I see that there are four new cats: Curl, Blaze, Nickel, and Penny.

Great job on the Allegiances, Curl! You get 10 points for that as well..

Current Score: 20

Leopardclaw: Chapter One...Curl missed a comma after "green eyes like mine..." to "...wild with terror.", but that's nothing short of a small punctuation error, so it's not counted off.

The overall grammar and spelling use is satisfactory for easy reading. 10 points to MysteriousCurl!

Current Score: 30 points

Leopardclaw: I like the beginning; the humor is a nice fit to the introduction to the cats. Plus 5 points to Curl!

Current Score: 35 points

Leopardclaw: Oh! I forgot something. The Prologues are usually in Warriors fanfictions, but it is absent in Curl's book. No points for that. It would have been 5 points. Oh well. Continuing on.

Current Score: 40 points

Leopardclaw: There's a cat named Tabby...interesting choice of names...not in a bad way...it's just...interesting.

They seem to be kittypets in the beginning, so they understand human language somewhat. Words like "house" and "barn" and whatnot. Also they call humans by their actual name and not by "Twoleg".

Very nice cliffhanger at the end of Chapter One. 5 points.

Current Score: 45 points

Leopardclaw: Chapter Two...a very action-packed introduction. I like it! 5 points

Current Score: 50 points

Leopardclaw: Chapter Two looks great! I don't even need to note anything! I'm just about speechless! Or is it wordless? Oh well. 20 points to you, Curl!

Current Score: 70 points

Leopardclaw. Chapter Three...a great chapter! Very lengthy and written just as the Erins would! I give you 20 points, Curl!

Current Score: 90 points

Leopardclaw: The rest of the book may as well be worth 50 points for being well-written!

Current Score: 140 points

Leopardclaw: And 10 points for a completed book bonus!

Final Score: 150 points

Leopardclaw: The book was well written and stuck close to the Warriors series very well. The point system is for fun, but I honestly love this book.

-WarriorsInterviews