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Journey of Four by All_the_writings

Alright I found this one!

Leopardclaw: Once again, the Prologue is here, but no Allegiances. 10 points for having the Prologue though!

Current Score: 10 points

Leopardclaw: Good use of spelling, grammar, dialogue (could be improved with copy pasting the longer dash instead of the hyphen, but that's a nitpicky thing), and such. An extra 30 points.

Current Score: 40 points

Leopardclaw: The story is very interesting so far, good use of word choice and style of writing. 50 points added.

Current Score: 90 points

Leopardclaw: Also the capitalization of the names and Clans are all correct, so a bonus of 60 points for that!

Current Score: 150 points

Leopardclaw: AMAZING use of paragraph indenting and spacing! 70 points for that because it seems to be missed in these previous fanfics!

Current Score: 220 points

Leopardclaw: Still a great story, so +30 points.

Current Score: 250 points

Leopardclaw: Lengthy chapters, so +50 points for that!

Current Score: 300 points

Leopardclaw: The rest of the book looks excellent, so +50 more points for that!

Final Score: 350 points

I recommend this one to be read!

~WarriorsInterviews