Raining

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You and Luis were having a picnic at the top of a hill at a park. Nobody was really there, which felt nice. The night had rolled by, the stars were twinkling in the sky.

The both of you layed on the grass, staring at the sky. "Amor you know what you remind me of?" He said, "what." You asked. "The brightest star on the sky." He pointed

A smile grew across your face, little dew drops splash on your face. Luis got up, and helped you up. "Care to join me for a dance." He held his hand out, "why if course." You said while laughing

The rain grew a bit stronger. He picked you up and spun around. The moment felt like freedom, you spread your arms out wide.

Luis put you down, the you guys were dancing to the waltz. You looked at him in his eyes. All you did was smile. It made you feel happy. The rain made your clothes slippery and wet.

Your hair was around your face. Luis pulled them behind your ears. You cupped his face with your hands, and kissed him.

This was like a fairytale story. You both backed away. "I think we should get going." Luis said, you followed him to his car. He opened the door for you like a gentlemen.

You hopped in and stared at the window. "I love you." You told him, "me too, perciosa." He responded, you guys arrived at his house where you met with Doña Thelma.

"Ay niños." She said laughing, she went to go get you guys towels. She came back wrapping them around you guys. Luis layed his head on your shoulders, "I love you." He said

Sorry if it was short, plz request.

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