Riding Horses With ONE DIRECTION?!

Sequel-ish?

I've actually been working on this thing for awhile and it has been up for awhile however it hasn't been doing as good as I wish it was! 
Please go check out the sequel yet not so sequel (It isn't a continuation of this story, however it has the same gist). It is an English version, and it is basically based around a young woman (in her early 20s I think, I don't even remember) that goes to a 3 week clinic kind of camp thing for 3 Day Eventing. So its like, the English version. And I tried to make it a bit funny too, with fourth-wall breaks and what not. I really hope you will like it! Yay!
Here's a preview for ya:

A deafening kick sounded from the trailer behind me, which made the woman next to me shudder. I rolled my eyes and smirked moderately at her reaction toward my ludicrous horse, as she was alike the rest. My head pivoted away from her, and my eyes scanned through the tall trees as I hunted for a view of the grounds.

Where am I going, you may ask? I am headed off to an equine camp for 20 year olds. It is like a clinic, however has the camping atmosphere, as we sleep in tents and roast marshmallows every night. I have attended the week-long clinic for two years, this being the third.

My mother pulled the vehicle around a bend, then headed down a prolonged drive, which made my leg tap wildly. The pristine snow colored fence visible between the shrubbery. A juvenile colt cantered along the edge of the fence, tossing his relatively small head every few seconds. He started to sedate his speed until he eventually halted altogether, then turned and galloped the other way.

We pulled into a designated spot for trucks and trailers, and once the car was put into park, I bolted out of the vehicle and hastily walked to the back where my equine was waiting. He nearly toppled me over when I opened the slightly worn doors, however I grasped his lead rope before he scurried away.

"I will not hesitate to smack you again." I muttered under my breath, and at those simple words the horse calmed down a touch. I nodded slightly toward him, then looked out at the surroundings. The atmosphere was quite busy, especially when a pristine black SUV rolled down the driveway. I stood with the horse's lead in my hands and watched the car, as I have never seen it before. After the vehicle halted, a group of four boys - the correct term would be men, however they acted like adolescents - leaped out of the car and started hollering as they walked toward the trunk. As I looked closer I came to realize these were not normal boys, as they were the boys from world-renowned boy band One Direction. I nearly fainted at the sight of them, as I was not a fan, however quite the disliker of the group.