Lost Star. [Revising]

self-promotion

I'm not here to update, please don't kill me >< please please please.

So I'm just finishing the first two page of my new story, it is a fantasy book with a touch of romance and mystery and I'm sure you would love it :p ---> http://w.tt/1OFSioQ 

Synopsis:

It is said that in the world of chaos and war, the four chosen descendant from the each world will meet, and together they shall find the missing box of pandora, and later release "The soul of hope" which will be the key of wisdom and justice that will bring back the peaceful world. Unaware of the prophecy, Madison Whitlock, Ariadne Arkwright, Luke Blackwood, and Finnick Brooks live their life like the usual. Not before they dream about strange voices and unusual events that occurs in the parallel world. They must cross their path as the holder of the prophecy and open the pandora box before the four world collide and fall into its apocalypse.

Would you please read it in your spare time and vote and comment afterwards I really appreciate it guys if you're done or if you have any critique or advice or how would you like the story to be continued you can comment/message me.

thank you so much! >_<