I feel like I am flying somewhere between clouds. But something beeps and this voice is like a distraction in my dream. From time to time I hear also some other voices, less annoying, but I cannot distinguish anything. Then the beeping stops and I hear only a low voice whispering something. I need some time to realize that this is not a dream any more. And that this voice sounds familiar. I try to open my eyes, but my lids are too heavy. I try to move my head but it only swings a bit to the left. Just after that the voices become louder and more excited. Like this would brig me more energy I finally succeed to lift my lids for some milliliters. Just in front of me are dark blue eyes, filled with a mixture of expectation, glee and a bit of fear. My thoughts are very slow and very confused, but I know that have seen these eyes before. The sight of eyes brings me a memory of his name. "Tobias..." I whisper... I still see that his eyes fill with tears and then the weight of the lids forces me to close my eyes again. I feel his gentle hand on my hand and his lips on my forehead. Suddenly I get aware also of the rest of my body and this awareness brings itself the feeling of pain that is radiating from all over my body. In some seconds it is unbearable strong and then everything gets dark again.
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Allegiant - alternate ending
FanfictionThe Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the secon...
