Hello again!!
Okay I know your probably pissed off with me not have a chapter and this not being a new chapter but guess what? I updated the first chapter and I wanted your opinion. I changed it up some and it's about +600 more words. I wanted to lead this story in a different direction, the characters didn't seem developed. So I tried something didn't.
So if you want to, please read the new updated chapter and tell me if you want me to start over from their.
This story is a learning experience for my writing and I know that wasn't what you signed up for but thank you for reading this far, so don't worry.
My problem was I always had a beginning and end but no middle. But with a stronger intro I think I can make want your reading now better.
Thank you again guys...this story is the only thing I can look forward to in the sense that I suck at everything else.
Xoxo Michael
P.s that picture above is a little collage I made for my story. They help me a lot with writing.
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