Chapter 16

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Note from author

hi all

Listen I forgot to say about the time jump, not a big one but just a couple of weeks sinc the run in between Eva an her father so I'll speak to you again and pls plz plz comment I need to to iv never written anything this dramatic and far fetch so I need to know if it works or if I sounds stupid please comment.

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I was in Kits spare room, I couldn't be anywhere near my Father.

Me and Kit ate moving, we are going to live in Australia or somewhere else just not here not where all this discusting horrible terrible things have happened I'm leaving going away.

my eyes were closed but I was not asleep I could here kit and Kit's mum and brother talking in hushed voices, did I forget to mention, today is my eighteenth birthday.

I heard the door open softly, " Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you..." I opened my eyes, sat up and put a smile on my face there was Kit, his mum and Jason carrying a Victoria sponge with blue icing covered in butterflies and eighteen candles. " happy birthday dear Eva, happy bIrthday dear Eva, happy birthday to you." Kit was sat on the end of my bed holding the cake towards me so that I could blow out the candles. I did, in one. " waaaahhhhhoooo, hip hip hooray, hip hip horaayy " Jason roared . We just looked at him like a mad man and burst out laughing as he blushed with enbarresment

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note from author

Hey AGAIN soz for all the notes

And I know this ones short but got writers block and aagggaaaaiiinnn I know I'm nagging but I need comments.

Please otherwhise I am never gonna get better which is why i started writing this in first place.

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