The Unrevealed Mystery

New Book

Here is the prologue of my soon to be coming book. Another Mystery-Romance.

I need you to guys to give me honest feedback.
P.s:/ Not a sequel
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Heart

18+
"Let's make you more famous, love," Valentina whispered to Ryan. She closed the gap between them. Their bodies were touching with just a thin layer of cloth in between. Valentina's eyes were dark with hate and anger whereas Ryan's eyes were full of lust.

Valentina roughly fisted Ryan's hair granting access to his neck. She sucked and bite him there, making sure to leave a mark behind. She didn't stop until she heard a soft moan from Ryan. Still, in control, she kissed lightly near his lip. It was a show for the paparazzi around who would publish Ryan and Valentina Kissed.

Valentina with one final look of satisfaction walked in, with him following right behind. Hundreds of questions going through his brain. The way they stormed in looked like can't wait to get in bed.

"What was that?" Ryan asked her. He was beyond frustrated.
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Who is more unstable the poor with changing home? Or the rich with changing relation?

Nia dares to fit in the lifestyle of rich. Trying to stay at Xavier School which had no place for her. It was the place for riches not someone like Nia.

Nia's only dream was to full fill her mother's last wish of her being an actress. It was indeed too much to ask for when you are constantly bullied and reminded of how ugly you are.

Ryan was different he never asked to be famous but he wasn't left with much of a choice being a celeb kid. He just acted how he was supposed to until the table turns.

The same old fat ugly girl Nia becomes the smoking hot model Victoria Heart.
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After years of writers block, I have started writing this one.
Please give it a shot. I hope you like it.