(Quil's POV)
I woke up this morning at six. I went down the hall and peeked into my dad's room to see if he was awake. He wasn't there so I walked into the kitchen to see him making breakfast.
"Hey dad, what ya making?"
"Pancakes and bacon... Your favorite."
"Yum! Thanks dad! Let me know when it's done, I'm going to shower."
"Okay."
I went to my room and grabbed some clothes on my way to the bathroom. I hopped into the shower and washed my hair and body with my Axe shower gel. When I was done, I jumped out and got dressed. I was walking back into my room when I herd my dad calling my name saying the food was done.
When I finished my breakfast, I herd the the door bell ring, so I walked to the front door to see who it was. I opened the door to see a girl about my age standing there.
"Hi" she said to me.
(???? POV)
I was driving up to my old house that I haven't seen for 12 years now. I couldn't wait till I saw them all again!
When I pulled up into the driveway, I was so happy that it looked the same as it did before. It brought back all the memories from my childhood.
I got out of my brand new green and black camaro, that I treated myself to before I came here, and walked to the front door. I knocked on the front door and Quil answered it.
"Hi"
"Can I help you?" he had his eyebrows furrowed in confusion.
"Ya, is Quil here?"
"Quil who is it?" I heard some yellfrom behind him.
Quil steped aside and allowed him to walk up to me.
"Dad?" I felt the excitement bubble up inside of me.
"Rachel?"
I nod my head enthusiastically and squeal as I ran up and hugged him. We started talking, trying to catch up, when we were interupted.
"Dad, who is this?" Quil asked.
"Quil, son, this is Rachel.....your sister."
"My what?!"
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Sorry for the shortness but please comment and vote. it is my first story i want to know what people think of it.