Chapter One

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by verifiedxfangirl

by verifiedxfangirl

This story is going to be in many POVs 3rd and 1st, and occasionally 2nd probably once or twice :) I'm trying to include any of my readers into this (hopefully) wonderful story.

Chapter One 3rd POV

Christina and Tris continue to walk, or, let's be realistic here. Christina drags Tris throughout the Pit into the many shopping stores in the underground cavern, for no apparent reason. "Christina.." Tris groans.

This is so boring tris sighs.

This is the most fun I have EVER had with tris!! Christina thinks herself. "isn't this great?" Christina asks Tris who's just being dragged along now. "Totally, we've been to half of the stores now, can we go??" Tris begs. "When we finish the other half." Christina chirps. "Lord, help me." Tris mumbles barely audible.

Tris POV (AN I HAVE FOUND THAT I DONT REALLY LIKE THE THIRD PERSON, ILL JUST STICK WITH SECOND AND FIRST :)

I groan from not only the walking, the shopping, and the excessive amount of clothing I have tried on, but the number of stores dauntless have. Why can't they throw everything into a thrift shop and tell us to dig in. Christina is taking candor or dauntless at Zeke's way to serious. I mean, she's making me wear TEN layer of clothing. On my waist up. We've been to fifty stores for bras, shirts, tanks, accessories, makeup, hair products, jackets, and some weird light thingy where you press a button, and you can speak to someone that's in another faction. I think it's called a pome. I don't know, we didn't have this is Abnegation for sure.

3 1/2 hours later

"There, done. You're ready," Christina announces. I'm wearing 3 tank tops, a shirt, crop top, leggings, jeans, shorts, a very long skirt, a jacket, and the necessary bra and underwear. She put on some nude eyeshadow, and lip gloss, and put my hair in a 6 strand French braid thingy.

When we arrive at Zeke's he opens the door right away, then says, "welcome to Zeke's fortress of candor or dauntless," "WHERE WE FIND OUT WHOS A PANSYCAKE!!"

Okay, end of chapter one, I bet everyone can guess who said the last line. Comment who you think-or know- who it is. Ba bye.

And scene

Lol I have uno more thing to say, IM GOING TO SEE ALLEGIANT WITH MY SOFTBALL TEAMMATE ON FRIDAY *cue the tears* SHR WAS TOO YOUNG, WAY TO FUCKING YOUNG, SCREW YOU WONDERFUL, TALENTED VERONICA ROSS, YOU TURNED YOUR BEAUTIFUL FANGIRLED CREATION INTO A DISASTER, WE WANTED FOURTRIS BABIES, WHY?? WHY!!??, YOU ARE TALENTED AND AMAZING, BUT WHY, WHY PULL A JOHN GREEN, HE TAKES YOUR SAILING SHIP, AND HE SENDS A STORM AT IT, I MEAN WHY, WHY GUS, WHY NOT HAZELS MOM, OR GUS' BLIND FRIEND, HUH, HUH?!? I need to make a rant book, like.. Now.