All Boys School Survival Guide for Girls

"All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls chapter 7

[hi guys, i had some questions regarding how Luc could be so attuned to Aliza, and it seems he's coming off as 'gay' or odd because he is noticing too much too soon (this was done purposefully to add a little humour to the story). I just wanted to clarify why i choose to do such a thing. If you were interested in the answer, read on, otherwise you may skip the explanation below and enjoy the chapter.

When i developed Lucien as a character, i made sure he's perceptive. And let's face it, no matter how nicely a girl dresses as a guy, it's safe to assume that unless u have had major make up help and facial hair covering ur face u can't pull off that stunt unless u have severe manly feature. Which in this case is not true. Although Aliza looks like Alex, in the beginning i explained that the soft features that Aliza has are also apparent on Alex, hence between the two he is the one who is a little more feminine featured. Knowing this, i still decided to make Aliza dress as a guy. So already there was a major flaw with her appearance because she does not look too 'manly' but it's a benefit for me in the later chapters which i do not want to give away. Although she is dressing like a guy and trying to emulate the speech of a guy, clearly it's not coming off too great. Of all the guys who have come in contact with her thus far in the story, all of them have noticed Aliza's oddities. Therefore Aliza's projection of Alex is a failure for people who are too close to her, and because of Lucien's perceptiveness and special closeness to her, he was picking up a lot more them then the other guys are. The whole gay thing was an added humoristic development that i liked 'cause it's just my writing style. I did not mean to confuse people, so i am very sorry if anyone was a little skeptical about Lucien's behaviour. I am glad that you guys are asking questions about the story, it allows me to know what u guys are finding hard to digest in the story and what u are enjoying so the future chapters i have, i can base them on what is most appreciated, so thx u all for your comments, i REALLY love reading then, and during my exams, they were my source of amusement and entertainment. Love you all for ur feedback :3

PS. Sorry for so long an explanation, i blame this on my teachers in high school (because it's been really long since i have had an English class and the lesson of in-depth explanation is still so drummed into my mind thanks to the million commentaries i wrote lol) and i just wanted to analyze the characters a little bit to clear some of the confusion.

PPS. Yeah, i know i will stop writing after this one...ok, so i also had questions about POV, guys, i am REALLY reluctant to indicate when the POV changes because to me it seems really unprofessional somehow because all the books i read, they change POV so often without indication that i am very used to abrupt POV changes and it naturally leaks into my writing. I feel that if i put who's POV is starting then it interferes with the flow of the story because it's too abrupt a thing in the middle of nowhere, but if you guys would like to do so, i will definitely do it, so in this chapter, please leave a comment either voting for or against the mentioning of POV changes, personally i am hesitant to indicate them, but since i am writing this story for you guys, i don't think i should be the judge of that]

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♠--Tip 7: Avoid consuming too much alcohol. It could possibly land you in a lot of trouble.--♠

~From: "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls

/That feels cold./

He felt his comforter being drawn and felt a wisp of cool night air brush his bare torso. The contrast from the comforter's warmth and the cool night air brought goosebumps to his bared flesh.

What was even odder was that his bunk sunk lower as something heavy descended upon it and soon he found himself spooned against someone's body and felt damp hair caress his shoulders and chest.