50 States of Mind ~ Hetalia Fanfic

I've Got a Question :DDDDDD

Soooo. I'll be updating soon, promise <3 Most likely on Tuesday! First question...Thanksgiving special? <:3 I dont expect many or even ANY answers, but if you do answer, that would help!

Oh, and I had an  idea for a side story. It would be an entirely different story though, and it would use the countries and states' human names in relation to each other. Here's a short (and crappy) idea of what it's about >.<

I'm only going to say that it takes place during Spain's conquistador days, and it revolves around Florida (Maria), New York (Jacquelyn/Jackie), Georgia (Gina), and Massachusetts (Meghan or Massie). They're human, and they all live in south America x3 So basically, it focuses on Spain's arrival (Romano and Italy are his right hand men). The struggles, the messed up relationships, the escaping >:3 A messed up idea of "love", and all that stuff! It's a bit dark when it comes to maybe Romano, Spain, and Italy's thoughts and deeds. And the states aren't exactly that paceful either. Just a random exerpt that I made up just now:

Maria looked at the blazing fire and fell to the ground. Her village, her home, heart, and soul was destroyed. All because he'd come. Why did someone so evil even exist? She'd trusted him, too. She thought he understood, and had reconsidered his plans. That entire year...just to kill her in the end.

"Not once did I say I wouldn't kill them."

Maria looked through blurry vision, turning to face the Spaniard himself. For once, Feliciano and Lovino weren't at his side. Maybe they were off torturing more victims of her stupidity? Maybe they were shipping more people to Europe, like they'd sent Meghan and Gina away...to become CIVILIZED.

What was civilized about murder?

"You looked directly at me in front of the emperor himself and promised me you wouldn't kill them!" Maria screamed, messy hair adding to her animalistic tone. Her eyes were wide with the pain in her heart, her teeth were pressed together and her hands were stained with blood. She'd TOUCHED it. She'd TOUCHED the body of the high priest...and he was dead.

Antonio frowned. "Yes, Maria..." he said, eyes glinting dangerously. "I looked at you. I said I wouldn't kill YOU. I love you...te amo...." Antonio dropped his axe to the ground, holding up a glimmering object. At a clsoer glance, Maria gasped.

"Antonio...you're tainted. Please...stop." she pleaded. Antonio laughed, a sinister sound. They very feel of it sent shivers up Maria's spine. He smiled in a twisted, darkened way. "I can't mi amor...you understand don't you?"

"Understand...what!?"

Antonio grinned. "We Spaniards have a disease of the heart...one cured only by gold."

Ha! The last line was a quote, by the way. I don't own it, so don't sue! x3 No seriously...dont sue. I'm broke.

Thanks for reading this story! Expect an update by Tuesday ;3

BTW, the song/ video is what inspired me to write this, along with the fanfic link from the original video x3 <33333333 Thanks again!