Hey you!
If you have gotten to this part I just want to thank you so so much for being such an incredible person and reading this first draft. For a while I only paid it attention when I was bored and I had no idea what it was or where it was going. It wasn't until a few random tumblweeds started started reading chapter after chapter that I became motivated to really write this story. I wish there was a word to describe how grateful I am to the ones who read this and motivated me through all 30 chapters, four hours and 48,516 words.
You're the best,
K.Leah Lotus
As for updates (This changes so stay tuned)
~Because I never considered finishing this story I am still not sure whether or not I should go on and begin the second draft. This wasn't really one of my most serious projects and it was more just a side thing. However, the idea hasn't been completely written off. In about six weeks I'll revisit this story and decide if I'm going to start writing the second draft. there is a lot of stuff I considered fixing and adding but the future is still unknown.
~If you are reviewing. Now you can start leaving detailed reviews. I'm probably the most grammatically incorrect human being on this planet as you can tell so i would really appreciate it. Also, for people who have already reviewed, I'll be using those to fix this if I do come back to it so thanks a lot. I luvvers you.
Annnd Discussion(Some questions for you that may help the second draft)
If you answer, don't feel obligated to answer them all. You can just choose the ones you want to answer and put their number by them.
1. Who do you think Willa should have ended up with and why?
2.Should Daisy have been dead?
3. Favorite chapter?
4. Least favorite chapter?
5. More kiss scenes? Less kiss scenes? And how did I execute the ones that are there?
6.Swearing. This is HUGE. Take some out, put some in? was it realistic that way or was it uncomfortable?
7. Who was your favorite character and/or least favorite.
8. What element of this this story did you really like?
9. What really annoyed you?
10. Are there any parts in the story where you wished something would have gone differently?
there will be more questions to come so if you don't like these, stay tuned :)
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