6 | Graystripe

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Graystripe... Hmmmmmmmm..... I'm not gunna lie, he's one of my favorites! But, he messed up a few times. First, let's start off with the fact that he called LeopardClan... SpottyClan. Like come on! ding! Wait, wuh? Like realleh Geaystripe? Cuz like, really? How? U know what guyz, plz don't hate my bat I'm lazy rn! So Ima just say what's wrong and then count and add up! Ok 2. Millie. She is horrible why couldn't Graystripe wait to get back to the clans? 3. Silverstream. Now I love Silverstream, and Silverstream isn't the problem. The problem is that Silverstream is a RIVERCLAN cat! There is SO MUCH thunderxriver blood in the clans. So ya. And then as said I'm lazy so.... And then... I can't really think straight rn. Guyz plz don't get mad at meh for being lazeh! So, another thing wrong with Graystripe. He lives longer then Firestar! Like in Bramblestar's Storm, him and Sandstorm are still living. HOW?! They like as old as Dappletail (I think that's her name ya know she WAS the oldest cat in TC before she died) rn! Maybe even older, and they're still living! They should've been elders a long time ago! Just... Naw! Now Ima stop now before I fall asleep writing this, but ya!

Total sins: 5 1/2 (I think Ima bad counter)

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