Starkit's Prophecy Review

Allegiances

ALLIANCES
ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz
I wish I could...

btw its set afte rsunset so

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom
If this takes place after Sunset, why is Jayfeather the medicine cat??? Wait, why is he even ALIVE??!?!?

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat
So far so good...

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace
...spoke too soon...
Apprentice DaisyPaw? I wonder if she was a friend of Daisy's...

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom
I didn't know Foxheart came back to life and then joined ThunderClan! And also changed gender!!! Where's Foxleap???

IceFire-white she cat
Ok, that doesn't even make sense...

ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom
What did Toadstep do to be punished like that?

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat
????

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat
????
BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes
Very girly for a tom if you ask me...

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine
???? Not even Blossomfall...

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace
Fox DaisyPaw and Apprentice DaisyPaw, are they twins??

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye
Grnee? Guess I haven't learned all of my colors...

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes

The last 2 r starKits siters
Starkit needs sitters? She's that crazy?