thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review!
If she wrote a good review is she even reading the right story??and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1
...I'm so jealousStarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
Since when do the warrior cats know numbers??"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled.
Yep. ShadowClan is attacking even though only one cat is visible.All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"
Poor Sandstorm...StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.
Yup, the prophecy was that the ShadowClan leader would visit ThunderClan camp and Starkit would claw him off. Definitely worth StarClan's time making that a prophecy.thnkx and ples no more flams
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