Chapter 23 The Vist

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SatrPaw rnan away she aws tears weire sterawming down her nick. WHY WAS HERE LEAF SO BADD?1!1?111/?12
What's wrong with her leaf?

Everyone ated her1! all ehr family nad frineds were DEED!1!1 shed gone throu so much and now not even JAXPAW her BSET FIREND would hepl here!11?
What? Since when has her family died? As far as I know Dawnsparkle is still alive, and Jayfeather has died and come back to life at least twice!

Also, what? Everyone hates you? The last I remember is everyone thinking you're amazing, even though I can't understand why!

She flet her kits move in side her. she alreayd loved them s o much. But it was hard becuase she loved JazzStae! Her life was so TREIBL RITE NOW.
Your life is suddenly so horrible just because Jazzstar doesn't love you back? Goodness

Sudenly a starlcna cat came down from the sjy. It was..... SLIVERSTREAM!1 "dont worry GleamStap" said the silverstream! Itwall all be ok in the nd youll sef.
Starpaw probably looks so ugly next to Silverstream

"i dnot know how it can be." she said. "it will." Epxlinad Silberstream.

"I HAVE KITS SILVERSDREAM! IKTS!11!1" SPARKLED STARGLEAM.
Great StarClan, I think she knows that

O know said StaSilverStream. "but ive ben in yoru place before iknown what it fells like,' she liked StarkIts fourhead. then she luf.
That you were pregnant with kits? Like almost every other she-cat? I don't know if that'll make Starpaw feel better (not that we want to make her feel better)

StarTit snifed. She had 2 get better.
Good. It didn't make her feel better.

For her KTIS. SHHE START wwalking awy into the forest.

I DONT KNOW IF I BEABLE TO UDATE MCUH RIHTE NWO IM SO SADDDDDDDDDDDD T-T
Good riddance.

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