Starkit's Prophecy Review

Chapter 3 - Training Under the Stars

OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.
I'm with rainy days on this one. Sorry, not sorry!

Shadowclan run from the camp.
"ShadowClan", meaning Blackstar

StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now .
Yep, that makes sense. A six month old kid can protect the whole clan and scare off a highly experienced leader, and the highly experienced leader just runs away!!

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."
???

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies.
Dude, that's just messed up

"Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog."
Dogging? Sounds exciting! I love to dog!

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything!

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed?
The prophecy meowed, haha

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.,"
I know a Scourge, but who's Scourg?

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool."
Who is SCOURG???

At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur.
Kawaii? Kawaii? KAWAII???? How does he even know that word??
And also, Firestar, or FireStra I should say, is Starpaw's GREAT GRANDFATHER. Firestar is in love with his GREAT GRANDAUGHTER!!!

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.
This is logical: a KIT defeats an EXPERIENCED FIGHTER in training. Makes TOTAL SENSE!!

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."
Yeah, Starpaw, go and hunt for yourself and don't hunt for the rest of the Clan, it's fine!

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_.
That is so out of character for Firestar. He took Starkit out hunting. A KIT!?!!?!

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars.
She locked up the stars!?!! How dare she??

She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan.
HoleClan?

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were best friends.
Why is it gross? I thought they were sisters? And even if they weren't it wouldn't be gross!!

She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.
STOP LOCKING UP THE STARS, STARPAW!!!!

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(lol u like it Jazzy I mead you as kawai as I could(
Still don't understand this word ????