Just that moment where you put in about 4 or 6 sentences into someone else and all they is "she headed out somewhere to find Melanie."
Okay what is somewhere? I the day rainy? Hot? Night or cold?
What is the character's emotions? Is she tired?
Biggest pet peeve.
USE DETAILS!!
YOU ARE READING
Rant Book. -CLOSED-
De Todo♥ If you are suffering then you are not alone. Let's all bitch together about life. ♥
