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The window, the red framed window, but how can I smash it without them noticing? Maybe there's a tiny crack somewhere around the frame I can use, wait, what about the jump, how high am I? I remember we went up those stairs, I'll just go look then.
I stand up rubbing my wrists and look out the window, there are some thick bushes right beside the house walls, if I land in those, I should be able to run. But where would I go? They're all older and taller than me, but I do play soccer and I know I have some endurance.
I jump when the door flies open and Tyler, the albino, and the blue eyed boy walk in with some boards, nails, and hammers. The nails and hammers make me freeze as my imagination takes over. I walk away from the window.
"James, get to work." Tyler commands, I see the blue eyed boy known as James standing there giving me an evil grin, then he walks over to the window and they work together to board it up. I see they purposely leave little spaces between the boards for light. This relieves me, I won't have to stay in the dark all the time at least.
The door! They swung it open and never closed it!
I inch towards it while they're occupied, I get to the frame and peek around the corner. That lady, Jasmin, is standing there waiting.
My heart pounds like a drum in my chest and the vibrations travel through me, this might be my chance, I have to try, I can't give up!
I race to the stairs and stumble/fall down them, I fly to the front door, but when I turn the knob, it's locked. I bound over to all the windows, and decide to kick one, it breaks and I hop through like a rabbit.
I'm free! Wait, not yet, they're coming now, my feet pound the dirt and I run for my life. No, Tyler is gaining on me! My heart races, and leaps in my chest, and my legs burn, I put all my energy into this.
He leaps, and I get crushed under his weight, he's winded me so I can't struggle, I gasp for air as he takes my shirt collar and drags me back. Once I regain my strength I stand up and kick him in his man parts. This makes Tyler crinkle up and dramatically fall to the ground groaning.
Pat is coming, I whip around to face him and I use some taekwondo on him, I bring back a fist and throw all my weight into his stomach. He freezes and I remove my hand and let him fall gasping for air.
Then the girl, Jasmin, comes bounding over with James. They're aiming to tackle me, if I just do a front kick, that should be good, but just before I kick, someone grabs my legs, making me fall on the spiky grass. And Pat decides to sits on my back.
I scream hoping someone will hear me, but I kind of doubt it.
"Why do you want me?!" I scream and Pat stands up to dig his foot into my back
"Because we want money and some fun." Pat smirks, I thrash around under his foot.
"Take her out." Tyler sighs, and next thing I know, my face is being pummeled with fists, and black dots close my vision.
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Kidnapped
ActionSixteen year old Claire Foster is taking a cool down walk from life, but life seems to be determined to have her and take her down. She is so absorbed in her thoughts that two mysterious people easily throw her on the pavement and drag her to a van...