Just My Luck (Miraculous Ladybug)

Chapter 8

Hiiiii people of the world!!I was just wondering how you guys think of my story SOOO far.I think I'm doing ok but still have some doubts so list the problems you would like to change thanks!!
Now on to my crazy sad sappy story...
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Adrien's POV
There was no words to describe how happy I was to see Marinette awake!!She must have had a nightmare or something cause she woke up terrified and the fact she yelled"I love Chat!"then it clicked she still loved Chat,me.She loved Adrien,me.I smiled so hard I thought my jaw would break."Your awake and alive!!!!"I yelled and embraced her with a kiss.She seemed surprised at first then accepted the kiss.After she let go and whispered a small "thanks".She was still looking pale and tired."You should sleep."I suggested."No problem."and in an what seemed to be a too fast I stint she fell back to slumber.Then the doctor came in and Alya and Nino were still speechless.I snickered at their faces.Soon Alya gave the death glare.I stopped."Now since she's still dangerously  low  on blood who is willing to give blood to her?"the doctor asked.I raised my arm as quick as she finished her sentence.Alya and Nino we're pointing at me snickering."Jeez"I thought."Ok it seems like you're the one willing,what a nice friend."the doctor told me with a wink.I smiled and nodded."Hook me up."I exclaimed with confidence.
One blood transplant thingy later
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Adrien still POV (lol)
It was 4:00 and Mari has been awake for a while.She had had color in her cheeks and lips again.It was purrrrfect again.In fact she was in such good condition she was let go.I helped her up with Alya while Nino watched and open all the doors and stuff.We were all silent still shocked how weak she was and that this was the Ladybug.She had a worried face which bothered me so I asked"What's wrong Mari?You can tell us we all know there's nothing to hide."she winced at that but hesitantly replied."My kwamii Tikki the one that gives me my powers I can't find her.."she sniffed,then continued "My miraculous is one me but I don't know where she is and I'm worried for her."she looked at me.She looked desperate but I couldn't care less."Well try transforming and she'll come to you I guess."I suggested to her after all I did that with Plagg before."Ok.."she whispered.Alya and Nino were silent until They spoke in unison "Are you sure?!"then both looked away and blushed while Marinette "awwwwwed"."I'll be fine."she mumbled then stood up on her own and shout "Spots on!!"near idem irately and whoosh of pink and red entered her miraculous and on the spot Mari was Ladybug.She smiled and we all smiled back."Spots off."she exclaimed with Tikki landing in her hands.
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Mari's POV
She moaned and mouthed "food"I nodded not caring I took my friends by surprise.Soon I  was at my bakery and Tikki floated to the cookie plate and stuffed a whole cookie in her mouth.I started laughing on the floor drowning my self with laughter.My friends ran in to se me on the floor howling I couldn't care less though.Then Tikki came and hugged my cheek."You did great!"Tikki complimented.I smiled then thought of Chat.Dang it I ditched him poor kitty must be blaming himself no no no no!Akumas feed on negative emotions,which Chat can be drowning in.I frowned and whispered "Chat".What I didn't notice is Adrien and Alya starting to pale.I looked at Tikki who gave a slight nod."Tikki sp-"before I finished Adrien yelled "wait!"I looked at him confused and eager for an answer why he stopped me from finding Chat.
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Adrien POV
I froze with my hand out.I looked around with Alya confused and worried then turned to Marinette who turned back,looking right into my eyes "Yes,what's the problem Adrien?"she asked.I had to think of an excuse and the first thing that popped into my head was"Well before leaving us,can you tell us where you're going?"real smooth Adrien "I'm going to see Chat at the Eiffel Tower,that's were we usually meet up and anyways I could use the refresher.."she muttered.Alya then blurted out "Didn't he reveal your identity?"This was the moment of truth."So what?That doesn't change the fact that I love him and for the matter of fact I still think of him as my kitty."she giggled.Then she got an approving nod and I whispered "Ok be careful y-you just got out remember?"I looked at her with concern.She smiled a rare non-goofy smile.Soon after her smile Alya blubbered again"What about Adrien!!"she cupped her mouth Mari looked down while Tikki hugged her cheek even though physically she's fine mentally she was dying in emotions,broke practically.I look at her tears pricking her eyes.I walked towards her she just closed her eyes tight."That's alright I'm flattered and honestly I would love to be yours but I'm sure Chat would be heartbroken.She didn't look up,but she slowly nodded,letting a few tears go landing on my hand.
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Mari's POV (I know I change POV too much but I think u get it:)
I whispered really softly "spots on"only enough for Tikki to hear.I didn't blame Alya for blurting it out I mean I hid my secrete from her for so long I guess she has emotions bottled in her too.I zipped away with Alya calling my name.
(Lame time skip....)
At the Eiffel Tower I was about to call Chat when he arrived.His ears were drooping and his eyes were puffy and blood shot."Did he cry that long?"I wondered.After a long silence he broke it and stated yammering "I'm so sorry Ladybug I broke your promise,broke you and risked everything.I want thinking right and was pained to see you hurt and now your family friends you are in danger because of me,the stupid mangle alley cat who can't keep his promise I changed e-"I cupped his mouth I couldn't bare watching him like this and that's what I wanted to tell him."I can't bare watching you like this."he looked up."I get it you were eager and just like you I wanted to see you without a mask...I just didn't want to be a disappoint.Im a total dork and super clumsy but please you shouldn't think it's all your fault we'll just have to work harder and I hope you knowing me won't change the relationship we have."I finished with that.He was looking into my eyes now watering.Then he broke into a sob and fell into my arms.He looked terrible hopeless.I knew he was truly sorry.As he sobbed he attempted to talk."I'm still so sorry you may forgive me b-but I I won't for-for-give my-s-self for t-his."I shook my head disapproving his statement."You should!"I exclaimed I hugged him tighter.He doesn't deserve this and you can't blame him his powers are of bad luck.I contained to hold him close he needed to let it go.After a while he stopped.We looked up into the sunset my parents were going to arrive soon.I looked at him he was trembling."Look it hurts to see you like this.Stay strong kitten!Be my knight in shinning leather again ok!"she proclaimed he looked into my eyes trying to find lies or any negative emotions.He found none I should know I mean I don't feel anything against him.I thought this bright us closer together.He did something he hadn't done in a long time.He smiled a true smile again.My kitty was back,then I herd his ring beep."See you soon My'Lady.".He was still holding my hand as he stood up.He looked at me then my hand.Chat let it go hesitantly.I let him take as long as he wanted I knew what he needed.He got on all fours and leaped away.I watched him as far as my eye can see then I parted my way to Alya's house.We were going see my parents and their was nothing stopping me from getting a hug again from them.

What she didn't know is that it would be her last hug from them.

Now I hope that hints something for all you readers.If that doesn't here let me warn you now WARNING SAD CHAPTER IS NEXT DARE TO TRY!!!