Collide

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Title

Collide

Genre

Romance, Non-Teen Fiction

Synopsis (What the author wrote)

When Alison’s fiancé, Nick broke up with her the day before their wedding, Alison was crash, devastated, angry, sad, and full of hatred in her. That same night Alison was driving back home when she end up into a car accident, a car accident that she thought will make thing even more worse than it is now. But taking care of a stranger wasn’t what she expected after an accident. Will it help her to forget about Nick and so she can open her heart and fall in love again?

What I Feel

When I first read it, I felt something was off. The language was there and sometimes not smooth. However, the story line was interesting enough to capture my attention till the end, that was when I saw the author's note, English was not the first language. Despite that, I felt that this was written quite well. Just a few editing and I'm sure the flow will be smooth. I quite like the transition of the chapters with different point of view clearly stated.

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