Trapped in a video game (re-writing)

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As I walk around, I go to the grave. There are beautiful flowers planted around it and a picture of him. Man, I feel really bad that this happened to him, but how come he's never escaped this place? An even bigger question , why I have I never escaped? I guess I kinda like it here, but I miss my mom and dad. I miss my friends and my room. All of these things that I miss is all flooding back. I feel the burning tears on my face, and rolling down off my cheeks. I wipe away the tears. I leave and hop onto aqua. I left to the base. At this point, I'm used to falling down this hole. As soon as I get there it's night time and I saw something behind me. It was a troll, but not as big as the troll i first saw. It's about the same height as me. I draw my sword. It's time to use all my practice. I use Jayden's tactic and punch it in the face. I knocked it back. I then punched it in it's stomach. It scratched both my arm from my joint to my wrist. It hurt, but I had to finish the job. I swept my feet under it's legs and it fell and I took the sword and stabbed it right in the heart. " don't mess with Alex." I said I took my sword out and it felt so disgusting. I've never even killed a an ant in my life, let alone a troll. I was so excited! Then poof! The troll disappeared into thin air. I was surprised. I looked at my sword and It had blood on it and I could only gag because it was so disgusting to look at. I then took aqua and went into the base. I put aqua away and searched for Jayden. I looked in the living room and he was asleep. He looked cute when he was sleeping. I put the bloody sword on table and went up stairs to the room and sleep after showering and stuff. My arms still hurt, so I wrapped them in bandages. I got in the bed and started thinking. What will his reaction be to the sword? Will he be proud of me? And what about what he said in the cave . He thinks I'm pretty... I'll have to think on this. I decided that this was enough thinking for one night. I then fell asleep....