Trapped in a video game (re-writing)

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As he left I started thinking. What's gonna happen? I know he was unsure of what to say so he told me not to worry.... but I am. About a half an hour later, I heard a gun shot and a pained yell. I recognized the voice... it was Jayden. At this point, I was done. I was going to help him wether he liked it or not. I unlocked the door and ran to the kitchen and grabbed the sword. It was still bloody so I wiped it off and headed out side. When I went out side i saw Jayden on the ground, writhing in pain. I saw " the enemy" in front of him. I was so angry I wanted to kill him. So I ran at him before he was about to shoot and kicked him. He fell. I tried stomping on his face ( I was that angry) but he dodged. He got up and looked at me. " is this your girlfriend? Huh ? Punk" he said chuckling. I punched him in his face while he was off guard. He was surprised. He pushed me and punched me in the stomach. I fell on the ground. I was in so much pain. It hurt more then i thought... " you thought you could beat me, with your weak, puny, little girlfriend. Now I get to kill you both" he said chuckling again. He kicked me again. " stupid girl, don't you kn--" were his final words before I stuck the sword through his heart. He looked surprised yet terrified. He fell to the floor dead. Poof! He disappeared but the sword fell on the ground. He was gone just like the troll. I was so happy I did that. I had to go tend to Jayden's wounds and I picked him up and put his arm around me. " alexsis?" He said " shhh. Everything's gonna be ok." I said. He fell back unconscious. I carried him to the living room and put him on the couch. I first wrapped some bandages around the gun wound in his stomach. I went to the stove and made him some chicken noodle soup. I poured it into a bowl once it was finished. I walked over to him and he woke up. " hey sleepyhead " I said smiling. He smiled back at me " ale--" he said before me cutting him off." Shh don't talk, you'll make it worse." I said. he nodded and I gave him the soup. I hope he's ok soon.... but who was that? Was that the person who killed his brother? I'm gonna give my self a headache if I keep thinking so much....