Zootopia: Prey Vs. Preds

Bunnyburrows: Treason

AN: hey guys. I...I feel I've ruined this book with the edits. Did I? Or am I missing something? Please tell me what you guys want! I am thoroughly confused! Should I keep editing? Should I go back to the way it was? Should I stop writing? Please tell me! (Sighs) 😥I guess I was ranting huh? Well give me advice and enjoy.
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General (POV)

Judy sat inside of a two story house near a small river that ran a great distance upstream and connected to a small lake close to the house. She had come here to tell her one of her best friends about her earlier encounter with a predator.

"So what do you think Judy?" Gazelles accented voice asked from the her kitchen. "Was jack Lying to you?"

"After my interrogation with the fox's dad." Judy started, a small cup of tea in her hands. "I'm pretty sure he was."

A second later Gazelle walked out of the kitchen with two sandwiches one was a carrot sandwich the other was a lettuces and tomatoe sandwich.

"Well in glad you finally told Jack." Gazelles said in a matter-of-factly way. "He was starting to be...Cómo se dice...obnoxious."

"You said it." Judy agreed immedaitly. The two ate their sandwiches and drank their tea in comfortable silence.

Gazelle looked out of her window and saw the blockade party coming back but...they had less cars than when they started off.

"Judy.."Gazelle said standing up. "Something happened."

Judy got up and walked over to the window her head barely seeing over the windowsill. She saw that the blockade party was back but they had half of the cars they started with. Judy's ears drooped.

"Gazelle we need to get into town now." Judy said her voice showing that she was worried. Gazelle looked down at her friend one of her eyebrows raised in suspicion.

"Is this about Jack?" Gazelle asked her cove showing that wished it was not.

"Oh god no." Judy said her voice showing her disgust. "Its about Zoey!" she explained. "She was in the Blockade group."

Realization donned on Gazelle's as she nearly forgot about Zoey. "Dios mio! You're right!" Gazelle said her voice panicking. Quickly Gazelle patted herself down and found her keyd. "Come on let's go!" quickly they both ran for Gazelles car and sped towards town.

They arrived at the same time as the Blockade party did. They quickly exited the car and searched for Zoey among the Beute Blockade party. After several minutes of searching they found Zoey in the last car to pull up.

"Zoey!" they shouted in unison startling the brown bunny.

Zoey was a bunny, the same size as Judy, who had golden brown fur mixed with a light tan on the lower part of her muzzle, the tips of her ears darkened into black. She was wearing a black hoodie and some black cargo pants covered by a carbon fiber vest along with some protective pads on her knees and elbows, she also had a black bandanna wrapped around her neck. Her eyes were a mesmerizing Grey that was normally a dull color.

"Oh hey girls" Zoey, voice light and angelic, said in a defeated tone. Her ears drooped and she was covered in dust. Judy rushed over to her and gave her a tight hug. Judy has known Zoey since they were extremely young. They've spent a lot of time together and knew each other practically like sisters.

"What happened Zoey?" Judy asked as she pulled away from the hug and looked Zoey up and down checking for injuries.

"I'm fine Judy." Zoey said a slight chuckle escaping from her lips. "As for what happened...it was Jack."